Her limbs are so heavy; she is pinned helpless to the bed. How can a head filled with mist weigh so much? It is impossible to raise it from the pillow. Even as she calls for help she knows there will be no response. It would have been better to be located at ground zero.
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After seeing the aftermath I would tend to agree.
It is sad to know that she is suffering so much.
Cathy, this is a brillant 55 as always.
Bless you & your family
Peace
it still gets you in the heart even now..
incredibly evocative
Feeling a little under the weather sis? ;-D
Oh a dark one... sadly she's right.
I've penned one a 55 thingy, when I get round to posting today...
have a lovely weekend
lotsa luv ann xxxxx
There's no way I would want to be a survivor. Very thought-provoking stuff.
hammer, just hearing about it was bad enough.
mona, peace comes in pieces.
blancodeviosa, some things must not be forgotten.
lime,I hope so.
michael, How can you tell?
ann, I'll be over later to have a look.
val, surviving is a lot harder than dying at times.
How can I tell? Guys' intuition I suppose. It's a gift we blokes have.
Cathy?
Great job as usual!
If you feel like your story...sorry.
It's the week-end..That should perk you up a bit!
This is so sad....u are a great writer C...I love your work...
Tina xoxo
Very well done Cathy, Cheers!!
Wow. Very powerful Cathy. Even more powerful than my new Intel Core 2 Duo Processor E6300 (1.86GHz,1066FSB) with 2MB cache.
You can't expect me to be totally serious all of the time, can you?
You blow me away with your writing.
tc
Hello cathy
Wish you a happy Mother's day. :)
micheal,It must be the way that I breath.
g-man, my weeks never end they just run into each other.
tina, you're not bad yourself:)
matt-man,Do I get a gold star?
dan,with that sat on your lap I wouldn't expect you to be serious ever again, yowzer!
top cat, I huff and I puff....
mona, thanks - right back at ya!
Cathy....don't feed the trolls. They just keep coming back for more when you do that.
She is in trubble.
(Re: the heroine in your foreboding flash fiction)
thats an art to say all that by pics and words.
Powerful post. So allow me to ruin the moment by irreverently noting that a "bigamist" can also be a Italian fog.
michael, All the goats are over the bridge.
sugar smacks, she most certainly is!
pankaj gupta, You're too kind.
puerileuwaite, LOL.
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