Friday, April 20, 2007

Battered Housewife

She feels so much pain, she thinks she may go insane.
What would make her feel better?
How to stop this gut churning, blood boiling, mind numbing fear.
The light stealing through the window glints on the blade of a knife.
She picks it up smiling, it would look much better buried in his chest.

24 comments:

Serena Joy said...

Oh, my. I can SO see that sometimes.

Tina said...

Hey Cathy!!! I like it...I like it a lot. Was this written back then or is it recent??? I'm sure all women have felt this way at one time or another...I know I have...lol

cathy said...

serena, can't we all!

tina, written today!

Dan said...

:(

lime said...

wow!!!! dare i say, you nailed it

Michael said...

Ouchies.

*hides*

Groovy Lady said...

Well now.. that was eerily dark and unfortunately a feeling I can relate to.

I'm sending wishes your way for your day to do a complete turn around and improve drastically.

ann said...

erm... now why didn't I think of that?

lotsa luv ann xxx

p.s. peeep oOO

p.p.s. love the new pic

MONA said...

Cathy,
First of all, I want to tell you that you look REALLY SO BEAUTIFUL in that new avtar!!!

& secondly, this poem is inspiring me to write a whole post, not a comment.

Maybe, I shall write a comment later...right now, I feel benumbed..

G-Man said...

Cathy?
Great 55!!!
I really like it..

BTW, please remind me to stay on your good side OK?
Plus Great Avatar!!
Galen xox

Malnurtured Snay said...

Reminds me of last night's episode of Scrubs ...

Miss Understood said...

Perfect.

puerileuwaite said...

This is almost identical to the screenplay I recently submitted to the suits at the Lifetime channel. Only in my version, it's one of those knives that can cut a tomato after slicing through his beer can. (I'm talking to the Ginsu folks about cross-advertising tie-in's.)

cathy said...

Dan, out damn spot!

Lime, LOL.

mik, It was your idea.

groovy lady, well drastic is a good adj in the circumstances.

ann, thanks a friend fixed my avatar.

mona,I'm a bit drained myself. LOL

cathy said...

g- man, I'm a bugger when I'm roused!!!!!!

snay, just give me a shout if you want anyone sorting out.

miss understood, your name and my post. LMAO

peurileuwaite, A spoon is sufficient if your pissed enough!

Top cat said...

very nicely crafted 55.
I love your writing style, even in one of these shorty's.lol
will you finish this with another 55? I'd like to know how it ends.

Is this avatar pic really you?
I swear you look like an actress.
If it really is you, you're HOT!
tc

val said...

Then she does it and they send her away for life. The law is written for men.

cathy said...

TC, I'll see what I can do about a sequal.Yes that's me one year ago,
I've aged since then.

Val, such cynicism! Who do you think you are? ME? lol.

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pink hippo said...

Cathy,

I agreee with TC, you look good!

Your smile is so beautiful and you glow!

Nice meeting you.

Hale McKay said...

Stops by to say hello, all the while looking as unmenacing as possible ...

Thanks for the visit and comment on Descates.

I like your site. While I scrolling about, I saw the pic of you and your mother. You made a lovely bride. (You still are lovely.)

cathy said...

pink hippo,I used to have a pink hippo which I cuddled when I was blue.

Hale McKay, Thank you kind sir.Aren't we a little proletarian for your tastes? LOL.

Queenie said...

Are you allowed to blog inside???