Friday, March 23, 2007

55 WORD FICTION. Honey I’m Here!

Smiling slyly the bored housewife licked the spoon.
She walked over to her husband,
who was sitting
with his back to her. Bending forward and grabbing
his hair she pulled his head back and inserted her
honey coated tongue into his mouth… KISS.
Drawing back she watched as he stared at her in sticky amazement.


puerileuwaite said...

Did they pollinate?

Brian said...

He wondered how she had found him in the wide world of blogs. They had nothing in common and he had never seen her blog, so he was baffled. He scrolled through some old posts; about cruises and stories and then he saw. He saw Vincent everywhere and the light dawned. Ann had been here.

55 Flash Comment.

Thanks for commenting, you are welcome anytime. :)

cathy said...

pw - If it means the same as copulate, I'm no flower.
brian - They should make VDO the patron saint of blog networking.

ann said...

gimme the honey mummy... LOL (do you remember that ad)?

gotta laugh at B's comment. Brian I do believe you're a tad jealous of vincent, but you know I love u 2!

have a lovely weekend... back to the chores

lotsa luv ann xxxx

p.s. how's the little one now?

Queenie said...

Oh!, cathy, where do you get them from???????

lime said...


cathy said...

ann-the honey monster but I don't remember the cereal.
queenie-you'd be amazed at the stuff that swills around in my head
lime- "sweets for my sweet and honey for my honey", but believe you me honey gets you sausage. It just doesn't make a good song title

barefoot_mistress said...

Oh that is excellent! I am so glad you played! I didnt have time to write today, but I am so glad you did.

Have a good weekend.

Michael said...

The only thing you should be sticking in that man is sharp and made of metal.

cathy said...

bm - I wrote it during a quiet spell and saved it to post on friday.
Michael- I have considered introducing him to mr breadknife on occasion, not to mention little miss magimix!:)

G-Man said...

Cathy, that was an awesome 55..
Our good friend Limey, told me just this week about it.. I was gonna attempt it, but being an old fart, it just slipped my mind...
Your story Rocked!! Galen

Thanks for visiting.

Roxan said...

Ewwww. LOL
When will people learn that sticking your tongue in someone's mouth is NOT a french kiss?

cathy said...

gman I will be checking next week to see if you come up with anything
roxan there's only so much you can say in 55 words.

Cazzie!!! said...

Excellent !!